feedback for first edit

when showing one of our clients which is the head of year 12 our first edit of the corporate video he was able to give us feedback on what he thought about it. 

he had a lot of positive things to say about the video he liked the presentation of the school and the way our final product came out 

although the said we should improve the sound as in some points the interviewees could not be heard properly and the music was overpowering. we took this on board and went on to improving the audio so that it would run much more smoothly.